Pre-Editing Your Manuscript

Years ago I worked with a phenomenal editor on my book The Lost Jewels of Hera. I loved her so much, I’m still with her today. I wanted to share with you the first email she sent me before we got down and dirty working with the manuscript.   I wish I’d had an email like this years ago, so I hope it helps you.

Here’s your manuscript. I need you to go through and search out the following words:

began to

started to

making

causing

like

as

then

and then

when

which

was

were

to be

had

went

put

Please reword the sentences where these words are found. They’re considered weak words and our goal is to make your prose stronger. Now, if you run across these in dialog, no worries. Keep the flow natural. We speak these words everyday. But the rest gotta go.

Also, search out the conjunctives: for, and, nor, but, or, yet. Check to see if these words connect two complete sentences. If so, put a comma before the conjunctive. If not, leave it out.

Make sure all If-Then sentences have a comma. If the sentence starts with ‘if’, it has a comma where the ‘then’ would have been placed. Ex: If I’d known, then I would’ve done it. If I’d known, I would’ve done it.

Go through and correct:

Towards – should be toward

Forwards – should be forward

Backwards – should be backward

Please reword all sentences with semicolons by either breaking into two sentences, adding a conjunction, or rewording.

Please revise sentences with colons. Ex: Instead of He had one thing on his mind: sex. Change it to He had one thing on his mind. Sex. OR He had one thing on his mind—sex.

So there it is folks.  I’ve actually developed this into my initial editing process. I suggest you begin going through yours BEFORE you send it to that agent or publisher.  This is not all the editing you will need, but it is a REALLY good start.  My thanks to Laura, my editor.  I enjoy working with you!

About Kelly Abell

I am a writer, blogger, and graphic artist. My aim for you is to utilize this blog to help you improve your writing skills, and to educate you on the publishing business. If you need help with writing, want to self-publish a book and need advice, or just want to kick a story idea around to see what works best, that's what I'm here for. As I gain knowledge from editors and publishers, I will share that knowledge with you. As writers we should always strive to improve our craft and grow. A day should not pass where you haven't learned or tried something new with your writing. Many thanks to my Night Owl Friend, Lea Ellen Borg for editing my posts! Best to you and all your characters and stories. Write on, my friends...Write on.
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2 Responses to Pre-Editing Your Manuscript

  1. jackstr952 says:

    Kelly – great article. I have my own list as you know but there are some here I’ll want to add. I’m amazed when I’m editing other author’s manuscript how often they put the ‘s’ on toward and forward.

    Like

  2. christinadrh says:

    Amazing what a few small and well thought out changes can do. They do read with much more power! Thanks, great post.

    Like

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